skitso422
06/09/08, 12:02 PM
i'm new on this forum, but i like it a lot here so far. this is a song I wrote ab two weeks ago, just looking for some feedback. I have music for they aren't basic chords and i don't have the names with me. If you want them later PM me and if i ever get a recording online i'll bump the topic back up. enjoy. (or don't.)
Eyes, Eyes, Lost in Your Eyes
What did I expect? It happened and I wanted it
all of it every second was bliss
Let's not shit anyone else it was our choice
only not one of us called that shot
but you took it
and i took it
and we both smiled
and took another together now its gone
Under an influence of your charm; it was better then I could imagine
oh no, i imagined the whole thing, too
Years of neglect drove me to another false pretense
hidden deep beneath your lips, in every kiss i stole
You were lying to me but it felt so good, so truthful
and filling not like when I lie to myself, ahhhhahaaaaa
but you said it
and I said it
and we both smiled
and pretended we could be happy once again
for 5 hours of my life I had it made and
even though we were still lying it was so good to lie with you
You project everything I want and need but selfish and lonely
as we are it won't ever mean a thing for us
We were lying together but it felt so true, still
better than any lie we've ever told before, ahhhhahaaaaa
so you faked it
when i meant it
only you smiled
while i was trying inside and
when i didn't
i looked up and down
into your eyes
and i was lost
in another idea of what i want
Eyes, Eyes, Lost in Your Eyes
What did I expect? It happened and I wanted it
all of it every second was bliss
Let's not shit anyone else it was our choice
only not one of us called that shot
but you took it
and i took it
and we both smiled
and took another together now its gone
Under an influence of your charm; it was better then I could imagine
oh no, i imagined the whole thing, too
Years of neglect drove me to another false pretense
hidden deep beneath your lips, in every kiss i stole
You were lying to me but it felt so good, so truthful
and filling not like when I lie to myself, ahhhhahaaaaa
but you said it
and I said it
and we both smiled
and pretended we could be happy once again
for 5 hours of my life I had it made and
even though we were still lying it was so good to lie with you
You project everything I want and need but selfish and lonely
as we are it won't ever mean a thing for us
We were lying together but it felt so true, still
better than any lie we've ever told before, ahhhhahaaaaa
so you faked it
when i meant it
only you smiled
while i was trying inside and
when i didn't
i looked up and down
into your eyes
and i was lost
in another idea of what i want