"Thoughts" by Tiffany

[Tbones]

So I'm trying to become a better song and poem writer. This is just something that came to me last night.

Tell me what you guys think:

All these thoughts fill my head,
With nowhere for them to go.
There’s so much to say with so little time,
But there are no words to express,
The way I feel,
The way I want to feel,
Are two souls stuck in one mind.
Caught in translation,
With nowhere to go,
And hope only seems like a four letter word.
When will it all stop?
When will I be saved?
Are many of the thoughts that plague my mind today.

[maybe_mayhem]

it's not bad. i think it could use a little deeper thought.

[Tbones]

that's cool. Thanks. I agree, I could have gone deeper.