stop this pain tonight

[nextnovember84]

we drift and drift
like a ship in the sea
but get nowhere
we stay in hte smae place
like a corpse, floating face down,
the waves billow over
we rise we fall
yet we stay anchored ( to eachother?)
and we will grasp hands
as a sign of hope
oh lord let me love you
please god let me feel your warmtth
because im beginning to feel cold

[saving face]

really cool song mate. i wouldnt use the last line myself simply because i have no faith in god. but overall really good song! short and sour!!!! ;-)

we rise we fall
yet we stay anchored ( to eachother?)
and we will grasp hands
as a sign of hope

there you go mate, u got ur chorus! in my opinion i reckon that would kick ass!