A nightmare in a dream

[Bostonstrong17]

This is my first time actually writing ever, so any and all feedback is appreciated, both negative and positive.



"A Nightmare in a dream"


I pace around this bed,
thoughts of you rolling,
in and out of my head.
Staring at that clock,
whoa, it strikes eight.
I've never been so nervous,
for a simple, stupid date.


Then it’s time,
oh, oh god it’s time,
I haven’t been this scared,
oh, oh in a long time.


With our hollowed eyes,
bodies filled with butterflies,
lay staring at that sky.
she said to me,
'How does it feel...
to always dream and never be alive?'
'And how does it feel...'
she said to me,
'to know love keeps you alive?'

And so we left this town,
and all that it stands for.
In search of comfort,
in all that we stand for.

Oh, Uh oh, oh oh,
My mind screams,
oh god it screams,
never let her,
slip through your seams.

but never forget your heart,
as broken as it may be.

And all of these,
these shattered pieces,
ever so unappealing,
scatter on the floor,
as we sit high above.
'cause whenever we're together,
the pieces come together,
A sanctity in love.

And so we left this town,
and all that it stands for.
In search of comfort,
in all that we stand for.

[lew_1987]

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