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spevin18t
02/03/04, 09:10 PM
tell me what you think...and maybe ideas for a title.
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v
this blood spilled on my hands.
a crimson moment for you and me.
deep red like the strands of your hair.
b
the knife i pulled from your hands, engraved
with blood. a reminder of you
c1
your last breathe chokes my lungs.
while the image of you burns in my heart.
i will cherish you forever.
c2
your last words pierced my throat.
now the ghost of you i'll hold in my arms.
i will wait for you forever.

MaybeOneDay
02/04/04, 01:15 PM
not too bad at all

spevin18t
02/04/04, 04:27 PM
thanks, any other comments?