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brandnew_punk_7
02/05/04, 04:37 PM
"Inn at Night"

In the dark is where im waiting
(by the bar)

Its there, the explanation,for you
its in the dash
(in my car)

Its pretty in the way i wrote it
Im pretty in the way im laying
pretty like a crash
(in a car)

I always tried not to look you in the eye
When you were looking through me
(I always tried my best, i swear i tried my best)
to make you understand or articulate it logically
that...when i said anything..and it mattered, i meant it
and if it didnt, that i wont admit i ever said this......

*screaming*
THIS IS HOW I DONT FEEL
THIS IS EXACTLY HOW MUCH YOU MIGHT MATTER
THIS IS HOW I DO THINGS
WITH NO REASON
SO NOTHING MAKES ANY SENSE FROM NOW TO THE HERE AFTER
FIND ME IN THE CROWD BY THE TIME ITS TOO LATE TO NOTICE
DONT WORRY...THIS IS JUST HOW I DO THINGS
QUICK WITH A FLICK OF MY TONGUE AND NO FEELING

In the dark is where im waiting
(with a lighter)

The little flame lets me see
Where im going
(in my car)

Its pretty at night when im driving
Its pretty at first when im spinning
out of control
(from the start)

\Lets not complicate nor contemplate another way/
\Lets watch......Like witnesses/
\Lets not contradict nor long to understand/
\Lets watch......Like Victims/

*screaming*
THIS IS HOW I DONT FEEL
THIS IS EXACTLY HOW MUCH YOU MIGHT MATTER
THIS IS HOW I WISH I DIDNT DO THINGS
I DO IT WITH NO REASON
SO NOTHING MAKES ANY SENSE FROM NOW TO THE HERE AFTER
FIND ME IN THE CROWD BY THE TIME ITS TOO LATE TO NOTICE
DONT WORRY...THIS IS JUST HOW I DO THINGS
QUICK WITH A FLICK OF MY TONGUE AND NO FEELING

UrOwNdIsAsTer11
02/05/04, 05:12 PM
I love it... Really impressive, really different... I honestly cannot find a single thing wrong with this

brandSPANKINnew
02/05/04, 05:38 PM
very well done.

brandnew_punk_7
02/05/04, 06:58 PM
thanks guys..im in the process of picking songs for a demo..so..all feedback helps... ;) :dead: ;)