There are 3 words to heal her, but He never Spoke

[hopelessdesires]

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There are 3 words to heal her, but He never Spoke

She watches in awe
Watches him move as he steals her heart
Watches him quietly as he tears it apart
She broke the silence, then he broke her smile
She never felt so lonely
He's never acted so vile
Promises are ruined, her comfort is taken
Three meant words turn into hatred
Lies are revealed in heartfelt conversations

If only he knew how she hurt inside
If only he saw the pain in her eyes
If only he read the story she bled

With her head in her hands, he'll leave her again
She'll always try harder. He'll never understand
Sleepless nights filled with dreams of dying
Phone unanswered... 4 a.m. and she's still crying
She's embraced in the moment her life fell apart
And she'll let him get her this time
She's always been a sucker for a sweet line
And he's a sweet talker

[Coronary Parasite]

i think i'm in love :blush:

[em0]

Comment if you will..

There are 3 words to heal her, but He never Spoke

She watches in awe
Watches him move as he steals her heart
Watches him quietly as he tears it apart
She broke the silence, then he broke her smile
She never felt so lonely
He's never acted so vile
Promises are ruined, her comfort is taken
Three meant words turn into hatred
Lies are revealed in heartfelt conversations

If only he knew how she hurt inside
If only he saw the pain in her eyes
If only he read the story she bled

With her head in her hands, he'll leave her again
She'll always try harder. He'll never understand
Sleepless nights filled with dreams of dying
Phone unanswered... 4 a.m. and she's still crying
She's embraced in the moment her life fell apart
And she'll let him get her this time
She's always been a sucker for a sweet line
And he's a sweet talker

i think that's actually really good, and very true how it all turns out in the end of a lovefilled breakup.

[aurora]

Comment if you will..

There are 3 words to heal her, but He never Spoke

She watches in awe
Watches him move as he steals her heart
Watches him quietly as he tears it apart
She broke the silence, then he broke her smile
She never felt so lonely
He's never acted so vile
Promises are ruined, her comfort is taken
Three meant words turn into hatred
Lies are revealed in heartfelt conversations

If only he knew how she hurt inside
If only he saw the pain in her eyes
If only he read the story she bled

With her head in her hands, he'll leave her again
She'll always try harder. He'll never understand
Sleepless nights filled with dreams of dying
Phone unanswered... 4 a.m. and she's still crying
She's embraced in the moment her life fell apart
And she'll let him get her this time
She's always been a sucker for a sweet line
And he's a sweet talker
This is the first time I have said this to anyone on here, but that really was beautiful.

[Shorty1186dd]

This is one of those poems that many many people can relate to. By many people, I mean me of course. Great job. I love this poem.

[OveriseFan]

How the hell did you find this?

[ArTkY_]

How the hell did you find this?
I have no idea why, but that made me lmao hardcore.

[a speedo model]

What the fuck? Nice bump.

[GhostMachine]

I remember when I wrote one piece like that...afterwards I threw it away. There was just something about how crappy it was. I'd say definitely keep trying but find something more original or at least try to.

[FazeThree]

I remember when I wrote one piece like that...afterwards I threw it away. There was just something about how crappy it was. I'd say definitely keep trying but find something more original or at least try to.

Even though this is a fairly cliche subject that doesnt immediatly make it a bad poem. Its good to write with emotion behind it and if thats actually whats happening to the person let them express it. I thought this was an awesome piece.

[lauren<3s music]

really really nice

[GhostMachine]

Even though this is a fairly cliche subject that doesnt immediatly make it a bad poem. Its good to write with emotion behind it and if thats actually whats happening to the person let them express it. I thought this was an awesome piece.


No, but in my opinion it was a bad poem from the first line. Cliche or not, emo poetry is always bad. And I don't care if they decide to express themselves, by all means go ahead but you shouldn't criticize me for expressing my view on this piece without that little sticky at the top of this forum. Does anyone read it anymore?