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JaketheJew
06/12/08, 06:29 PM
Let me first start off and say that this a rap. I know this board/website is mostly for rock, but i write both and listen to both. Well here it goes my first attempt:-) .

if i should die before i wake
as i hear biggie say
if i should ever revenge this hate
would it matter?
we all see technology growth
but why generation after generation
same taste of hate?
same taste of corruption
the same prohobition just causes mass genocide and destruction
we're sinking without an sos or the help line
the sad part is that we know where it lays
were so used to the same old same
we been sold on how nothing could ever change
how we need to relie on the upper class for our lives
but were destructing our world we've become so unfamilar of
will i have a grass field to lay when my last breathe goes away
or will i be buried underneath landfills
of the books that dont educate and breed more types of prejudist and hate
yea the schools are out of date
even better still a w.a.s.p tells us how marijuana unsafer then alcoholic water
but tests are unproven cause they done before seatbelts were a mandate
so who they trying to save anyway?
so were a religious country that antitodes say...
but why do i got a neighbor dying and no politican pushing for universal healthcare, anyway
we pretend to be universal policemen of the world chasing terrorist but were about to elect one in mccain
and we wonder why corruption devours our inner streets just watch the news and you will see

tupac asked why he saw no changes
but still i don't see any today
the prophets beg for peace and moral responsability
but i cant profit off what they say and i believe that
jesus, moses, and muhammad all had the right words to say
yea im a universal citizen tired of careless destruction
still i request a change
but i doubt i will see a change today

so i tuned into channel 62 or 66 i cant tell the difference
they tell me how illegal immigration a problem
but i wonder why?
because nafta lost 15 million farmers their careers and need to find a new life
go to the root of the problem the anaylist say
"its border patrol!" screams another
yea its a border issue on 1600 pennsylvania ave
and that house where senate and congress debate and bring more inner city hate
they border the rest of the country that says we need help
to bad they run to corporate control like a sec snith for a monopoly mogul
but yet everybody knows
its the same sex anyway after you get married
so why the gay/lesbian hate?
love is love and if you cant see it then you blinder then ray charles
try to impeach bill clinton?
a blowjob never caused 4,000 american youth their lives
try to impeach bill clinton?
monica lewinsky never caused death over a million iraqi
global policemen coming from the inner city
cause when we need to police the universe we let rape and murder
in darfur
in bejing
where their gov't wont let anything questioning rap, talk, or sing
but it all starts out in the homeland
we've neglected the generations after the one with 'nam
say goodbye healthcare, social security, infrastructure, and education
but i wonder will it always be this way?

tupac asked why he saw no changes
but still i don't see any today
the prophets beg for peace and moral responsability
but i cant profit off what they say and i believe that
jesus, moses, and muhammad all had the right words to say
yea im a universal citizen tired of careless destruction
still i request a change
but i doubt i will see a change today

riding up on his white horse
washington said and repeated
beware of the two party system dressed as democracy
but a democracy is not real
its a goal to be obtained with wheels that can rotate
but then why there no terms limits for a senator
congressmen or even governor
a mayor?
council?
supreme court justice?
nothing it seems
so the richer get richer cause the poor cant break in
unless were breaking in
and thats a charge rolls up the patrol officer when u reached third strike
to prison system u head now
only trying to support a baby boy
so in prision learn about drugs and gang strategy
no education there
no chance for a better forever
just fucking to the wasteside
weve got daughters walking the streets in earling morning hour
but we refuse to check them up for an std
so they walk and we spread a curable disease
were the monster if you didnt guess or see
our hate has become contagious you see
and as universal policemen we've show the way
not the good one
the one fileld with hate
a four lettered word so simple
hate
its everything nowadays.... how do we change?

tupac asked why he saw no changes
but still i don't see any today
the prophets beg for peace and moral responsability
but i cant profit off what they say and i believe that
jesus, moses, and muhammad all had the right words to say
yea im a universal citizen tired of careless destruction
still i request a change
but i doubt i will see a change today

GhostMachine
06/13/08, 08:51 AM
I stopped after the 1st verse. Its horrible. I can't find a single bit of rhythm or flow in this piece. The grammar is screwed up and the whole idea, after skimming through the rest, is constantly repeated over and over with different lines. Its a very boring piece.