Introspection

[Jabble524]

Introspection

When I needed angels
I found devils in disguise
For the longest time
I was afraid to tell the difference

You fractured my faith
You shattered my soul

I was blessed with devils hands
And promised salvation
But I won't sell my soul to get to heaven

You fractured my faith
You shattered my soul

But I've picked up the pieces
And looked inside myself

Today, I'm happy with who I am

Think For Yourself

You told me
Deny yourself every carnal desire
Or prepare to burn
Hell, brimstone, and fire
You don't own your soul
It belongs to me
In the name of Jesus
Set this sinner free

You can say whatever you want
But I won't be a victim of salvation submission
Or fear of perdition

I've found the courage to think for myself
And I realize that my sexuality belongs to me
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[Jabble524]

As I'm writing this, I see that many people have taken the time to view it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work. I truly appreciate it.
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[YouthMovement]

this is pretty good man. i like how the entire piece can reflect so many conflicts and be so accessible, yet with the very last line you give YOUR conflict and the rest makes so much sense. as per usual, it's a little hard to determine a real flow, that is IF this is a song and not a poem or something. im not one for religious pieces, but this one was solid.

[Jabble524]

Thanks for the feedback YouthMovement.

[leezer]

this was ok