It's a Lifestyle, Not a Crime.

[roughDiamond.]

She's on the floor and can't get up.
She's had too much yet not enough.
So did you forget about me last night?
Because you never left my mind once.
Fucking for a pastime.
Sickness spawned from lies and lying.
Think of me when the lies come so easily flowing.
And then again when she's lying in your bed.

[FallenAngel117]

i liked how the first 3 lines flowed, they follow a pattern in the structure of the piece. however it doesnt flow as well after that.

its a good subject nontheless

[roughDiamond.]

i write in free verse, so its not supposed to flow.

but thanks anyway.

[chaosB4storm]

free verse should flow.

ALL poetry should flow unless there is some form of poetry that I do not know of that goes against the basic principles of poetry.

[MCSmate]

I like how this started but it kinda just fell at the end.