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Behcet-William
06/14/08, 09:17 PM
Girl

its 3 in the morning im trying not to cry
im thinking about you baby and i don't know why
maybe because your beautiful and sweet well thats no lie
i miss you girl i want you back and this song will tell you why

girl why you do this to me i want to say im sorry
scared you will rejected me and then ill have to worry
because your amazing girl and oh so very lovely
wow i wish i had a chance now that would make me lucky

girl i love you never meant it more than when i say it to you
girl i love you never said it more than i have to you

when i first saw you girl i didnt know what to say
never forget that was the day you took my breath away
i wish there was a way i could make you mine again
or are we just gona live as friends forever
or will you ever love me or is that never



girl i love you never meant it more than when i say it to you
girl i love you never said it more than i have to you

5 years later we still aint together
so i guess girl that it will be never
but remember girl im always gona be here by your side
and my love for you will never ever die
just like a candle being lit forever
your always going to be here i will hurt you never


girl i love you never meant it more than when i say it to you
girl i love you never said it more than i have to you

10 years later girl you are married
and you have given birth to the baby you have carried
he looks just like me girl yeah i am his daddy
were married girl i told you that it would happen
i love you girl and thats how its going to stay

50 years later girl where old
im still in love with you girl that candle aint yet cold
are kids have got kids girl wow were lucky
thank you for the life that you have given me

my heart was in a box but now girl you have the key

girl i love you never meant it more than when i say it to you
girl i love you never said it more than i have to you.

hockeyguitar99
06/14/08, 09:53 PM
oh dear god

SickOfStars
06/14/08, 09:54 PM
hey dude. just letting you know there's a lyrics/poetry forum for this stuff. may not get the best reception here

darkog
06/14/08, 09:56 PM
dude... whatz up with the tune?

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 10:01 PM
oh my bad i fort you put lyrics here can you tell me were i put the lyrics im new to this site

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 10:04 PM
looks like you found it

hockeyguitar99
06/14/08, 10:04 PM
oh my bad i fort you put lyrics here can you tell me were i put the lyrics im new to this site

Well before you do that, you should probably learn the English language

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 10:04 PM
Well before you do that, you should probably learn the english language

Is that anything like the English language?

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 10:08 PM
yeah mate i think my A in english might prove to you oh well im not like you who gives it to people on the internet so you know peace x

Genuma
06/14/08, 10:11 PM
Hahahahaha. I love this.


50 years later girl where old
im still in love with you girl that candle aint yet cold
are kids have got kids girl wow were lucky
thank you for the life that you have given me

my heart was in a box but now girl you have the key

summer skin
06/14/08, 10:11 PM
wVbFM06hvbs

SickOfStars
06/14/08, 10:11 PM
yeah, you can get to the forum by going back to the forum main menu, going down to interactive/whatevz and then "share your lyrics and poetry". this won't seem as out of place there.

_jonas
06/14/08, 10:13 PM
yeah mate i think my A in english might prove to you oh well im not like you who gives it to people on the internet so you know peace x
sorry. people on this site are major dicks when it comes to anybody's truthful, honest work.
and they really make no effort in not blowing off anyone's feelings but their own.

summer skin
06/14/08, 10:14 PM
yeah, you can get to the forum by going back to the forum main menu, going down to interactive/whatevz and then "share your lyrics and poetry". this won't seem as out of place there.
FUCK YOU SICKOFSTARS

SickOfStars
06/14/08, 10:16 PM
FUCK YOU SICKOFSTARS

Hahahahaha

I continue to be nice on this site, full well knowing I'm in for that every time

<3 you

_jonas
06/14/08, 10:16 PM
wVbFM06hvbs
Brilliant Call:lolatpost:
13iLkTrDlbI

summer skin
06/14/08, 10:19 PM
Hahahahaha

I continue to be nice on this site, full well knowing I'm in for that every time

<3 you
Hah that's basically how it happened last time, you were the only nice one and she singled you out.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 10:24 PM
if theres any bands or a artist who wants to use this song be free to do it and add my myspace http://www.myspace.com/behcet_williamb i am working on some new songs atm and i will keep adding them and see what you think x

hockeyguitar99
06/14/08, 10:26 PM
yeah mate i think my A in english might prove to you oh well im not like you who gives it to people on the internet so you know peace x

if you don't want people to be critical of you

then your in the wrong place

SickOfStars
06/14/08, 10:28 PM
Hah that's basically how it happened last time, you were the only nice one and she singled you out.

absurd. just absurd.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 10:28 PM
okay then dude im just wondering yeah but are you someone who's really fat and has no life now im being critical of you so :)

summer skin
06/14/08, 10:29 PM
if theres any bands or a artist who wants to use this song be free to do it and add my myspace http://www.myspace.com/behcet_williamb i am working on some new songs atm and i will keep adding them and see what you think x
oh my god this is a real person.
please post more lyrics.

summer skin
06/14/08, 10:30 PM
http://a908.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/24/l_5459da5a9be44cb67a71f2d8bd633abb. jpg
what hair products do you use, im looking for some tips.

darkog
06/14/08, 10:31 PM
if theres any bands or a artist who wants to use this song be free to do it and add my myspace http://www.myspace.com/behcet_williamb i am working on some new songs atm and i will keep adding them and see what you think x

okay.. you better be home tomorrow morning 'cause i am gonna call you at 7:30, okay.

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 10:40 PM
if you don't want people to be critical of you

then your in the wrong place

Actually, I was criticizing you.

Chromefox
06/14/08, 10:51 PM
Literary genius. Shits all over Thom Yorke/Jeff Magnum/Sam Beam. Bravo.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 10:54 PM
thank you very much :)

Genuma
06/14/08, 10:59 PM
It almost gives off a Dylan meets Lennon vibe.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:00 PM
please people add my myspace http://www.myspace.com/behcet_williamb

hockeyguitar99
06/14/08, 11:02 PM
Actually, I was criticizing you.


i know that

and i was criticizing him

your really only proving my point

versus_god
06/14/08, 11:03 PM
My really only proving my point.

hockeyguitar99
06/14/08, 11:05 PM
okay then dude im just wondering yeah but are you someone who's really fat and has no life now im being critical of you so :)


ha thats funny, like really creative and stuff.

just like your lyrics

SickOfStars
06/14/08, 11:06 PM
I'm the fucking http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/4619/crowdsd2.jpg

why would anyone fuck with me?

_jonas
06/14/08, 11:08 PM
I'm the fucking http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/4619/crowdsd2.jpg

why would anyone fuck with me?
:jackoff: i do hope you mean literally

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 11:08 PM
i know that

and i was criticizing him

your really only proving my point

*You're

:horse:

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:10 PM
can people like talk about the song lol

hockeyguitar99
06/14/08, 11:11 PM
*You're

:horse:


you're right.

but you're still proving my point, so thanks

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:13 PM
can people like talk about the song lol
It sounds like what Jesus would write after he titty fucked himself.

SickOfStars
06/14/08, 11:14 PM
can people like talk about the song lol

probably not man. post it in the lyrics forum. anything misplaced usually just becomes a dick-around thread for people.

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 11:15 PM
probably not man. post it in the lyrics forum. anything misplaced usually just becomes a dick-around thread for people.

hahaha your avatar is amazing.

IWasaCamera
06/14/08, 11:24 PM
Poetry/Lyrics forum.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:28 PM
sorry but please rate the song it would mean alot cheers x

IWasaCamera
06/14/08, 11:30 PM
I'll evaluate it in the appropriate forum.

_jonas
06/14/08, 11:33 PM
A+++ my man!

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:35 PM
WOW YOU THINK THANK YOU http://www.myspace.com/behcet_williamb CHECK MY MYSPACE OUT

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:36 PM
11/10

_jonas
06/14/08, 11:37 PM
WOW YOU THINK THANK YOU http://www.myspace.com/behcet_williamb CHECK MY MYSPACE OUT
trying to add...but no know last name.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:38 PM
Last Name Behcet

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 11:39 PM
11/10

http://www.stardestroyer.net/Mike/Movies/SpinalTap.jpg

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:41 PM
http://www.stardestroyer.net/Mike/Movies/SpinalTap.jpg
Haha.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:43 PM
I Am Actually Only 15 Lol Wow I Must Be Good

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:44 PM
Lol wow thats sooo amazing

IWasaCamera
06/14/08, 11:44 PM
Your age is already displayed but cool beans.

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:45 PM
Lol And Check Out My Other Song I Posted " Is It Love Or Lust " Not As Good As This One But Its Quite Good

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:49 PM
Quite good? You do say?

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:52 PM
Lol I Wrote It In Like 5 Minutes

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:53 PM
Really? I couldn't tell!

Imagine if you had taken 10 mintues. Jesus!

Tyler Revolution
06/14/08, 11:54 PM
Bahahahajajajajahaahha... I'm drunk and this is by afr the funniest thread I've seen In awhiel.

Neo Cassady
06/14/08, 11:54 PM
Lol I Wrote It In Like 5 Minutes

So you'd rather post lyrics that you threw together than to take time and write/revise/improve, then post them when you think they're actually good?

Behcet-William
06/14/08, 11:56 PM
Hm True I Guess But Do You Think This Song Is Good

_jonas
06/14/08, 11:56 PM
Bahahahajajajajahaahha... I'm drunk and this is by afr the funniest thread I've seen In awhiel.
you don't say? drunk?

Genuma
06/14/08, 11:58 PM
I Have Caps Lock On Isn't That Groovy?

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:02 AM
Vaginal seepage.

absolutecrunk
06/15/08, 12:03 AM
Caps Lock Rules I May Not Ever Turn It Off Again

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:04 AM
Your Lipstick His Collar Dont Bother Angel I Know Exactly What Ghoes On

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:04 AM
zBsxqQIu_5s

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:06 AM
I Hate It When People Post Youtube Videos Because It Throws Me Out Of The Conversation Because I Don't Like To Watch Them But I Do Like Making Run-on Sentences.

darkog
06/15/08, 12:07 AM
So you'd rather post lyrics that you threw together than to take time and write/revise/improve, then post them when you think they're actually good?


why would he do dat when heez a jeeneeus..

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:08 AM
Yankees Suck

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:09 AM
QnirzLzc7TQ

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:13 AM
Fuck The Kids Fuck The Kids Fuck The Kids

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:13 AM
Is There Any Artists Who Would Be Interested In Singing This Song

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:14 AM
The Search Function Would Love To Cover It.

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:14 AM
Yankees Suck

swing and a miss

absolutecrunk
06/15/08, 12:14 AM
you got a new job......all your friends are getting weird.....AHHHHHHHH!!

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:14 AM
Anal Cunt

absolutecrunk
06/15/08, 12:14 AM
mRS SWEENY TODD WOULD LOVE IT

darkog
06/15/08, 12:14 AM
QnirzLzc7TQ

are you one of *the* jonas bros?

http://snagwiremedia.com/wickedyouth/2008/02/25/jbs-thumb-450x337.jpg

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:16 AM
Would you like shit on that BRIZ-MUTHA-FUZZ-UKK-IN BRICK!!!


ass to mouth?

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:17 AM
I'd fuck the two chicks in the middle.

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:17 AM
are you one of *the* jonas bros?

http://snagwiremedia.com/wickedyouth/2008/02/25/jbs-thumb-450x337.jpg
yeah actually. second from left.

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:18 AM
are you one of *the* jonas bros?

are you one of *the* foo fghtrs?

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:18 AM
swing and a miss
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f260/TheOtherAndrew/Randomtopia/yANKEESsUCK.jpg

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:19 AM
my mom's tits feel like bags of sand. mmm,mmm,mmm.

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:19 AM
you got a new job......all your friends are getting weird.....AHHHHHHHH!!
PLZ STOP FUCKING MAI MOM

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:22 AM
PLZ STOP FUCKING MAI, MOM
fixed.

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:23 AM
Timeline:

1. You stalk her.
2. You see her for the first time.
(Fix time paradox in editing)
3. You are still stalking her after five years.
4. Ten years later and you somehow knocked her up. Creepiness = turn on? It also seems neither of you knew, could there have been a form of rape?
5. Now it's fifty years and it seems as if you two are together, I must have missed something. Stalking, knocking her up, then happy marriage? I need to try this.

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:24 AM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f260/TheOtherAndrew/Randomtopia/yANKEESsUCK.jpg

6 games back in June? Please.

Also,
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/wastedspacejm2/ws-1.jpg

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:26 AM
6 games back in June? Please.

Also,
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/wastedspacejm2/ws-1.jpg
Pshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:27 AM
lool oh well its still good lyrics i aint going to be singing them

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:27 AM
So Good.

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:28 AM
in before lock

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:29 AM
In before the Yankees win another World Series.

TheOtherAndrew
06/15/08, 12:30 AM
:rolleyes:

summer skin
06/15/08, 12:35 AM
http://a908.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/24/l_5459da5a9be44cb67a71f2d8bd633abb. jpg
what hair products do you use, im looking for some tips.
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg86/lesserxthanx3/myhair.jpg

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:36 AM
In before the frollick.

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:38 AM
lol i guess you like my hair

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:39 AM
http://bp1.blogger.com/_2oO5vCgz8Hs/R_j5TyUU-uI/AAAAAAAAAUw/fBHDjuT4Njw/s1600/inbeforethecock.jpg

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:40 AM
do you like my avatar lool

Genuma
06/15/08, 12:42 AM
i lool it

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:43 AM
http://images.encyclopediadramatica.com/images/e/ec/Lol_wut_verbose.jpg


edit: WTF JONAS BRING BACK THE COCK YOU RUINED THE JOKE!!!!!!!111ONE!1ELEVEN

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:44 AM
should i charge if someone wants to use my song

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:44 AM
a battery?

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:46 AM
it says on my other thread that its been closed what that mean

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:48 AM
http://images.encyclopediadramatica.com/images/e/ec/Lol_wut_verbose.jpg


edit: WTF JONAS BRING BACK THE COCK YOU RUINED THE JOKE!!!!!!!111ONE!1ELEVEN
A blind man interviews for a job as a quality controller at the local wood mill. The manager calls the blind man into his office and asks him how he expected to do this job since he was blind. The blind man replied he would do it by smell. The manager decides to test him and places a piece of wood in front of him. The manager asks, "What is it without touching it?" The blind man replies, "That’s a good piece of fir." "Correct,” says the manager, “now try this one." "That’s a bad piece of willow," says the blind man. "Correct," answers the manager.
With that, the manager decides to play a trick on the blind man. He get his secretary to lift up her dress and put her crotch in the blind mans face. "I'm confused,” says the blind man, “Can you turn it around?" The secretary turns around and puts her ass in his face. The blind man says, "Oh, you’re trying to fool me! But I know exactly what kind of wood that is. It’s the shit house door off a tuna boat!"

Neo Cassady
06/15/08, 12:50 AM
A blind man interviews for a job as a quality controller at the local wood mill. The manager calls the blind man into his office and asks him how he expected to do this job since he was blind. The blind man replied he would do it by smell. The manager decides to test him and places a piece of wood in front of him. The manager asks, "What is it without touching it?" The blind man replies, "That’s a good piece of fir." "Correct,” says the manager, “now try this one." "That’s a bad piece of willow," says the blind man. "Correct," answers the manager.
With that, the manager decides to play a trick on the blind man. He get his secretary to lift up her dress and put her crotch in the blind mans face. "I'm confused,” says the blind man, “Can you turn it around?" The secretary turns around and puts her ass in his face. The blind man says, "Oh, you’re trying to fool me! But I know exactly what kind of wood that is. It’s the shit house door off a tuna boat!"



http://photoretch.files.wordpress.com/2007/08/wut1.jpg

Behcet-William
06/15/08, 12:55 AM
what band or artist would suit my song the most

_jonas
06/15/08, 12:57 AM
death cab maybe...

bright eyes?

summer skin
06/15/08, 01:02 AM
the beatles

_jonas
06/15/08, 01:03 AM
Manchester orchestra. BAM

summer skin
06/15/08, 01:06 AM
the beatles.

Chromefox
06/15/08, 01:07 AM
The scene kids would pop stiffies if you passed those lines on to Brand New.