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MrChainsaw389
02/15/04, 04:18 PM
I wrote this earlier today, I won't be offended if you lose complete respect for me after reading this, but go ahead and check it out anyway :afro:

I can see you, like an altered mirror image
bleeding from the same places
broken wrists and absent kisses
knowing you'll never wake up
and still be in your dream
still be in your dream

Laying in bed, crying to songs
of excessive emotions and acute dispositions
Know the real heartache
The more you think about the one you love
think about the one you love
The more you wish lacking passion was a drug
lacking passion was a drug

Take the same roads to misery
the same paths to agony
but keep it to yourself because
you friends will all run away from you if they know

So you can cry now that you know how to yearn for affection
you can bawl now that you cannot lack indisgretion
Shake and shiver from head to toe
Sit at home and break down on your own
This twist of fate puts you in my shoes

Coronary Parasite
02/18/04, 09:42 AM
thumbs up!

maybe_mayhem
02/18/04, 07:33 PM
thumbs up!
agreed.

para ser libre
02/19/04, 04:29 PM
I wrote this earlier today, I won't be offended if you lose complete respect for me after reading this, but go ahead and check it out anyway :afro:



Loss of respect?...Dude I gave you a reputation point for this one. BRAVO!

MrChainsaw389
02/19/04, 06:57 PM
Loss of respect?...Dude I gave you a reputation point for this one. BRAVO!
awesome, thanks dude

hopelessdesires
02/20/04, 03:45 PM
I must say, I did enjoy that thoroughly. Kind of fits how I'm feeling right now.

Good job.

xXPunk033
02/28/04, 10:07 AM
That's pretty good.. probably one of the only really good ones I've read so far..

I don't think people know how to criticize others when nessisary.. oh well.. I like your's! Nice.