Short Films

[wineandpoptarts]

www.youtube.com/wineandpoptarts (http://www.youtube.com/wineandpoptarts)
check out these four short films i made and let me know what you think, i love getting reviews.
thanks,
-brett
www.youtube.com/wineandpoptarts (http://www.youtube.com/wineandpoptarts)

[wineandpoptarts]

bump - Please check them out!

[DickfaceChillah]

I liked the I'M JUST A GIRL one cause it was at a few different locations. I liked seeing more than just a dorm/apartment! Not saying they are bad. Pretty funny. Props.

[writeacliche]

Watching "Rich People" the other three were not tolerable on about any level.

What kind of equipment do you guys use?

[wineandpoptarts]

Watching "Rich People" the other three were not tolerable on about any level.

What kind of equipment do you guys use?

um, thanks? can't remember the exact equipment, but it was a sony camera/microphone and final cut pro. all the equipment was on loan for those four so i don't have it right in front of me. just out of curiosity, how were they not tolerable? like quality of the films themselves, or the comedy or what?

[reductiondesign]

Only judging from Rich People...:

Your lighting is terrible, as is your editing and sound. It's hard to see or hear anything; I'm having trouble picking up the unfunny jokes and the lack of plot.

:shrug:

Make things brighter and move people around. Oh, and a story would help.

[wineandpoptarts]

Only judging from Rich People...:

Your lighting is terrible, as is your editing and sound. It's hard to see or hear anything; I'm having trouble picking up the unfunny jokes and the lack of plot.

:shrug:

Make things brighter and move people around. Oh, and a story would help.

yea, the sound i have an issue with...i had to condense the whole thing with imovie to get it online, and it mixed its own sound, unfortunately. but sorry, there aren't any jokes...? at least not in the sense of set-up--bait--punchline anyway. i'm not making excuses but i'm not making sitcoms either.

[writeacliche]

um, thanks? can't remember the exact equipment, but it was a sony camera/microphone and final cut pro. all the equipment was on loan for those four so i don't have it right in front of me. just out of curiosity, how were they not tolerable? like quality of the films themselves, or the comedy or what?
hey man, i'm sorry, i just went over what i wrote and i came off as a douchebag.

alright.

i enjoyed the PSA quite a bit. i think that if the narrator sold the punch of the jokes a bit better, it could have been really good.

i had trouble getting into your longer skit (starbucks one)

the friends betting on their pal getting up in the morning had alot of potential but it felt dragged out, or i have a short attention span. i'm sorry again for that.

[wineandpoptarts]

hey man, i'm sorry, i just went over what i wrote and i came off as a douchebag.

alright.

i enjoyed the PSA quite a bit. i think that if the narrator sold the punch of the jokes a bit better, it could have been really good.

i had trouble getting into your longer skit (starbucks one)

the friends betting on their pal getting up in the morning had alot of potential but it felt dragged out, or i have a short attention span. i'm sorry again for that.

haha, no worries man. i love getting feedback and i'm honestly interested in what people think, so i appreciate any constructive reviews, and also appreciate you taking the time to not only check them out but let me know what you think (twice even).