"I Am"

[mike0305]

I am just an open book
so read what you've left inside
trust me,
its the horror story that'll keep you up at night
each chapter ending in a twist
you'll never see them coming
because I know...
I know I never did.

I am the ink pen
you used to write your lies.
you used me. used me.
used me to ink your lines.
your lines that will forever stay
be forever etched inside.

I am the metaphor
that keeps your story straight
the underlying message
that seems impossible to find
the hidden message in your hidden lies

I am forgetful.
but i can't forget.
I am trustworthy.
but no longer trusting.
I am getting older.
but I'll never understand.
I am... I am...
you did this to me.

[thespearkid]

Reads like a freshman English class assignment.

[mike0305]

haha i think that may have been where i wrote it , but thanks for the constructiveness btw lol, jk Reads like a freshman English class assignment.

[lew_1987]

it's not too bad, but it seems to be a bit too repetitive.