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chaosB4storm
06/20/08, 11:43 AM
tell me what u think of this one guys

Find Me

Grapefruit for me
Grapefruit for you
But where are the planets?

Grapefruit for me
Grapefruit for you
But where are the pomegranates?
bailmeout13
06/20/08, 11:47 AM
Huh?
MCSmate
06/20/08, 02:07 PM
i didn't get this
Burning Star IV
06/20/08, 02:09 PM
Mine's better:

Millions of peaches
Peaches for me

Millions of peaches
Peaches for free

Plus the centered text is rather unnecessary.
TK
06/20/08, 03:17 PM
I am also out of the loop on this:-|
h0merg0mez
06/20/08, 04:46 PM
A masterful working of literature.
chaosB4storm
06/20/08, 09:18 PM
Mine's better:

Millions of peaches
Peaches for me

Millions of peaches
Peaches for free

Plus the centered text is rather unnecessary.

lol that is most definitely not better.

And no one is out of the loop, anyone can appreciate this poem as long as they find the word *pomegranates* funny. I know that i do.
OveriseFan
06/20/08, 09:21 PM
Haha. I love it, actually. Mostly because I laughed at the last line.
chaosB4storm
06/20/08, 09:29 PM
Haha. I love it, actually. Mostly because I laughed at the last line.
thank you overrise fan. Im glad you can understand the point of the poem lol.
OveriseFan
06/20/08, 10:00 PM
It was such a good play on words after the first stanza. I don't know how this doesn't put a smile on everyone's face.
SuicideKing
06/20/08, 10:27 PM
i'm not sure why, but this makes me think of "This Is Just to Say" by William Carlos Williams... =]
Wild Orchid
06/22/08, 05:26 AM
Mine's better:

Millions of peaches
Peaches for me

Millions of peaches
Peaches for free

Plus the centered text is rather unnecessary.

that is a Presidents of the Usa song called Peaches.
it's not yours.
TK
06/22/08, 06:04 AM
that is a Presidents of the Usa song called Peaches.
it's not yours.

:mellow::squint: :hitself:
SuNDaYSTaR
06/22/08, 07:16 AM
Mine's better:

Millions of peaches
Peaches for me

Millions of peaches
Peaches for free

Plus the centered text is rather unnecessary.You should make it a song; I'm sure it would become a pop hit in no time.
The Rush
06/22/08, 08:04 PM
Pomegranates is the most epic word of all time.
chaosB4storm
06/23/08, 06:15 AM
Pomegranates is the most epic word of all time.

it would be *Death Star* except *Death Star* is two words lol. So yes, pomegranate wins.
Burning Star IV
06/23/08, 08:46 AM
that is a Presidents of the Usa song called Peaches.
it's not yours.
You're a filthy liar.