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bestxbroken
03/25/04, 02:23 PM
plz give me sum replys cuz i dont know how good i am at writing songs


What if I told you I never meant to
What if I said it was all a mistake
Your eyes can see if you listen to me
As you look I see disappointment
Tears fall down your cheek
And as it touches you lip
The confusion leaves
Your lips trembling
There for we take a walk
Still not getting close
To what I want to talk about
Even as I think I break and cry
I ask you to stop I try to tell
Signals are sent and im afraid
Tripping over my words
As I tell you I want to die
And to my surprise you can relate
My present to your fading past
Lucky me you cant let go
Your tears falling on my blood
Your words are sinking in
The confusion of my confession
Your tears falling on my blood

pUnkKid174
03/25/04, 03:00 PM
it was ok i guess...i dont think it had much of a center idea because when i read through it it changed ideas a lot...theres not much detail but if you tried a little more then i guess it would be ok eh