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-Pinkerton-
06/25/08, 11:10 PM
I stopped on this corner
This was not where I belonged
This was not me
This was not my life
How could I be here?
Why was I here?
I wanted to go
I needed to go
But I am trapped now
I cannot leave
I cannot get out of this
I am not me anymore
I started again, turned the corner
Maybe I should be here
I brought this on myself
It is my fault I am on this empty street
Dampened with this diamond embrace
Temptation was the culprit
Will is at fault
Fantasy is to blame
Passion, my only mistress, is the cause
Love was just an illusion
It never entered this labyrinth
It never will

bootsydan
06/26/08, 12:26 AM
For best poem in your Yr 9 English class?

GhostMachine
06/26/08, 07:50 AM
I didn't think it was very good. Decent, but not worthy of any kind of awards.

h0merg0mez
06/26/08, 12:35 PM
I don't like it

SuicideKing
06/26/08, 09:59 PM
pretty ordinary

chaosB4storm
06/27/08, 12:04 PM
Every reply has been accurate thus far, and so I do not feel the need to comment. lol