Marijuana Song

[Wild Orchid]

I'm a little narkoman
I like the hashish and marijuana
I know I'm gonna die one of these days
At least I go with a smile on my face

But the things aren't easy so
Cus' it's prohibited by the law
So you can find me in bushes and in parks
Hiding with my joints
In the dark

I like the goverment
I like the police
But most of all I like cannabis

I am not saying you should smoke all day
But 1 or 2 times should be O.K.
Cus with or without the grass
You always have people just sitting on their ass
It is legal to drink wine and beer
But why is ganja a subject or fear?
With us providing education
To bring Marijuana legalization

I like the goverment
I like the police
But most of all I like cannabis

[xmy.only.exitx]

most of your rhymes didnt rhyme. and it didnt flow smoothly. except for the first stanza it just seemed conversational and too prosaic

[xmy.only.exitx]

but you're just 14. maybe i was overcritical.

[Vemynal]

I agree with xmy.only.exit.x altough I'd like to add to that comment... I understand that you're 14, but the whole thing was a bit too childish, especially the first part.
You should try to improve the phrases you used, If you know what I mean. =/

[giveupthetoast]

really? LOLOL