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matryr_me
04/11/04, 02:06 PM
new song. first time anyone's ever seen it. constructive criticism is appreciated.

you're on fire, and you can't even feel it.
you're singing along, but no one else can hear your song.
but there's something in your head
telling you to get out while you can.
there's something in your head
telling you this is your song
this is our song.

[come on just one more time, just sing it one more time] (x2)

you're on fire and you can't even see it
just get in the car cause i've got someplace i want to be
just shut up and open the sunroof
roll your window down and put something on the stereo
cause i need something that can make me feel alive

[come on just one more time, just sing it one more time] (x2)

turn the volume up and sing even louder
the star i've seen is brighter than ever
the only wish i can make is that the dawn never comes
so you can burn forever, singing along forever

[come on just sing it one more time]

somuchcloser
04/11/04, 03:05 PM
umm... yeah this was me. i was accidentally in my old screen name.

so yeah.

maledixtion
04/20/05, 09:37 PM
i like this a lot. the title is awesome too, Perks of Being A Wallflower reference?

mondeoman
04/20/05, 10:44 PM
Not bad. The chorus is a bit weak.

heyRomanticA__x
04/21/05, 02:56 PM
Sounds great to me. Screaming or just plain singing?