disguise the lies- lead up to the chorus and chorus.

[PUNK_freak19044]

I see your faceupon the wall.My heart went deepand i felt smallThe deepest side of mejust went and hit the groundNow, now,now,now,now,NOWThe night was cold last time i saw-youuuu(whispered)- But i found my heart and souland i look outside my window and i see YOUR BURNING EYES.now i just need someone to help me- DISGUISE THE LIES

[MCSmate]

You need work on structure, then I can address the rest so I know what I'm reading.

[Vemynal]

I liked the part with the burning eyes and disguising the lies, although it wasn't easy to read because of the structure. The rest was just "meh".