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West49ur
07/06/08, 09:03 PM
Dearest Regrets

So just go ahead
Cuz I cant see anything in front of me anymore
Ill send my dearest regrets
To the child that I could never be
So just go ahead
Make sure to post my letter
Anywhere that you can
I’ll just fade away, beneath my dearest regrets


I’m sorry I never could be there
When you needed me most
Don’t threaten me with those broken promises
Of leaving me, I know, im conceited
Im conceited, I’ve been a little tied up, with joys of optimism
Im conceited, a little drunk, subordinate, im screamin out your name


Quit callin out my name, Im already yours
Im through playing this game
I’ll send you the bouquet of flowers,
And the box of truffles, I hope you get the message
That im gunna stick around for a while


So just go ahead
Cuz I cant see anything in front of me anymore
Ill send my dearest regrets
To the child that I could never be
So just go ahead
Make sure to post my letter
Anywhere that you can
I’ll just fade away, beneath my dearest regrets


Don’t get out of the car, don’t you ever leave
I want you to stay right here with me
And say anything, just to pass the time
On behalf of my heart, Ill write you a ticket, give you a fine
Cuz anything you say, its bribery, and believe it or not
I love you so fucking much today


And under certain circumstances, if you
Can’t post my dearest regrets
I want you to do something for me
Make sure my words, are always spoken
Not by anyone, but by a beautiful girl
…You


So just go ahead
Cuz I cant see anything in front of me anymore
Ill send my dearest regrets
To the child that I could never be
So just go ahead
Make sure to post my letter
Anywhere that you can
I’ll just fade away, beneath my dearest regrets

West49ur
07/06/08, 09:03 PM
I Just Want Some Feedback. Feel Free To Bash

thejaredens
07/06/08, 09:14 PM
I thought it was a little lame , cliche , and just bleh ... I know that I myself am not the greatest writer in the world but I think I have enough knowledge to know that this is pretty lame and somewhat gay ... I dont know if I can give any advice... just work on it and dont give up writing just becuz I thought it sounded like shit ... sorry .. being honest

West49ur
07/06/08, 09:29 PM
hey man respect

SuicideKing
07/06/08, 09:56 PM
i think the message is really vague... maybe you should give a little context for what your singing about...?