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Love As Arson
04/30/04, 08:02 AM
Darkness all around my sack
Tears flowed down my face as she turned her back
G-String Divas played in the background
Slit my throat just to hear a sound
Cut my wrists because Rebecca tore me apart
Isn't is supposed to last an eternity when you're thirteen
Are you not supposed to die lacking a spleen
Penis
Vagina
They go together like bread and butter
The vagina is wet like grass after rain
It's because of my hottness
I don't need no sex test
Beauty is my name
Fucking is my game
Darkness, darkness
Deliver me from darkness


Tell me what you guys think. It would mean a lot to me. I poured my heart and soul into this poem. I wrote it after I cut my wrists when my girlfriend of two days broke up with me but before I wrote it I cried for a while. Anyways I hope you guys enjoy it.

Love As Arson
03/05/06, 10:09 PM
Bump.

Coronary Parasite
03/05/06, 10:09 PM
haha dom is such an asshole.

Darren McLeod
03/06/06, 12:03 AM
i see potential.

you're hired.

SLADE775
03/06/06, 01:12 AM
http://www.jerks.cx/pics/yay.jpg

Andy
03/06/06, 01:59 AM
By "darkness" he means anal.

ArTkY_
03/06/06, 05:23 AM
ahahaha

In Dolorosa
03/06/06, 10:23 AM
flawless piece of literature.