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Dolen
07/09/08, 08:30 AM
I’d give all my mid-day hours to make this one last for two.
I’ll be clinging on to time, wrapping it around you.
Now this time is stretching thin, it won’t last much longer
But I’ll do all I can do to make 3am last forever.



[i'm trying to think of a chorus to go here, i've got ideas but they won't come out]

A saint in her own way, she's just aspiring to be Jude.
Her laughter all to frequent and her outlook all too crude.
Caring is not an option, she’s sold it all away.
Emotion behind frosted glass, tears for other eyes.

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the line 'a saint in her own way, she's just aspiring to be jude' was motivated from the line ain an anberlin song which says 'i am the patron saint of lost causes'. Jude is the patron saint of lost causes. I thought that might need some explanation. :-)

casey741
07/12/08, 09:23 PM
I really like the second verse. the thing about jude is cool for lack of a better word ha.