Bleached

[ForgetThisLoser]

i know it hurts
And its worse
cause you don't like to cry...
But for whatever its worth
You may have my shoulder all night..
I'll be your boy in shining sneakers and tiny t-shirt
For forever....
For whatever its worth...

I'll be here
Before eyelids open...
I'll be here
waiting and hoping
your kisses are blowing
for me....
Cause I'll be here...
I'll be here
for you
forever my dear...

We're just kids
And things like this
cause more drama than needed
But for whatever its worth
I'll shine low, when you feel defeated...
I'll be your boy that sits on his bed, let you drown yourself in my shirt
For forever..
For whatever its worth..

I'll be here
Before eyelids open...
I'll be here
waiting and hoping
your kisses are blowing
for me....
Cause I'll be here...
I'll be here
for you,
forever my dear...

Quiet my darling..theres no one around
You're tears are all hidden to never be found
Deep in the polyester and cotton
Left to dry up and to be forgotten...
I know that your aching and dont want feel
But theres more than make-up could ever conceal
Your mascara is running but not quite as fast
As you when speeding away from your past
I'll always be here, with my shoulder and shirt
You can cry for hours....until it doesnt hurt...
For forever...For whatever-----its worth...

[lightswitchrave]

thats deep man... your lyrics are pretty good... definately more mature and quality than anything i could come up with... sounds a lot like brand new... have you actually put music to these songs cuz it just seems like theres a lot of words and they would be some long frickin songs man... but good stuff! i wish i could write like that

[Alex Djaferis]

pretty good. not my style, but good =)

[ForgetThisLoser]

Yeah thanks man, Brand New is kind of an inspiration in my writing. I have music too it...that song lasts about 4 mins...sort of long...but its pretty cool...And its not that deep...just look at how things make you feel..and you'd be surprised at how much you can write...

[pUnkKid174]

that was really good...i thought it sounded like Dashboard but it can sound like Brand New

"Quiet my darling..theres no one around....For forever...For whatever-----its worth..." i thought that was the best part of it all because its longer than the rest and flows really good

if you've put music to it i'd love to hear it...

[ForgetThisLoser]

Thanks..appreciate you replying...Yeah...I guess it has a different vibe for people..hopefully its different enough though to make a difference...Yeah..that last bit is my fav peice of that I"ve ever written. I might have it on my website soon...and I'll have link..so if you choose you'll be able to check it out. <\3later</3

[STDD4life]

i have read a lot of your songs...i haven't posted a reply to all of them but i can tell you that all of your songs are so original!!!! i wish i could write like you