I Burn My Life

[EmoXxxXRocker]

I BURN MY LIFE

Verse:

I Would Love To Start Again
From What Is In my Head
I Just Hate All This Burning
That’s Coming From My Heart

Pre Chorus:

Only God Knows
What I’m Feeling Deep Inside
With all Of This Pain
No one Realise
That I’d Like To Burn (In Peace)

Chorus x 2:


Please I Don’t Wanna Go On
On This Firing Pain
That Releases From This Song
And I Will Cry In The Rain
Just Burning (My Life)

Verse:

My Soul Is Trapped
In Another Life
Where Everything Is Messed Up
And there’s no light

Pre Chorus:

Only God Knows
What I’m Feeling Deep Inside
With all Of This Pain
No one Realise
That I’d Like To Burn (In Peace)


Chorus x 2:


Please I Don’t Wanna Go On
On This Firing Pain
That Releases From This Song
And I Will Cry In The Rain
Just Burning (My Life)

Bridge:

The Fire In My Heart Is Like A Glass
That Cuts Me Off From My Life
I Hope That You Shall Burn
In The Pains That I’ve Suffered
Until The End Of The World

Chorus x 2:


Please I Don’t Wanna Go On
On This Firing Pain
That Releases From This Song
And I Will Cry In The Rain
Just Burning (My Life)

P.S:
I Just Hope That These Are Good Lyrics, They Are For My Band.
Please Tell me If they suck or not.
Thnks

[I'm DC]

:lol:

[eleven eleven]

:uhno:

[EmoXxxXRocker]

just trying, you should help instead of laughing.
Oh well, I tried

[chaosB4storm]

hmm...
the capitalization of every word really annoyed me.
nothing about this idea or how it is written is original or creative
the flow is horrible
there are little to no powerful words

Yes, you may have tried, but this is clearly not an inspired peice of work. Try not to write for the sake of having lyrics, wait until you are truly inspired by something before you write, and if you feel that you were inspired while creating this poem, then you have never been inspired before.

[chaosB4storm]

And never call something "I Burn My Life" lol.

[lew_1987]

I was trying for a while to think of something constructive to say about this, but I really don't know what to say. This is terrible in every way possible, sorry.

[Nevuk]

Become an atheist - step one to being a good lyrical writer. This isn't the 1800s, people.

[Neo Cassady]

Become an atheist - step one to being a good lyrical writer. This isn't the 1800s, people.

But to "burn your life", maybe Buddhism is a better choice...

[CellarGhosts]

Hate to break it to you, but this is just terrible in every possible way.

[ThisIsSuchAPity]

Fake account.

[matt_bergeron]

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahah...

but seriously..... can't be a real account.

[dodge_3001]

give up

[industrialbelt]

sign to victory or give up.

[TK]

why is it we always need 20 people to repeatedly say something sucks?

That being said, I'm calling fake account as well.

[EmoXxxXRocker]

ok, it really sucked...: )....I should write something about I'm really inspired, thnks fr everything...you' re kind of right of the account name...:)