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stendhal
07/15/08, 12:45 AM
Digging for gold
in the deepest of South's
with a futile drive
voices crying out
counting '8, 7, 6, 5...'
Praying for peace
and tranquility
with a pompous drive
voices whispering
counting '4, 3, 2, 1'

Up to my hips
in the deepest of shit
with desparate eyes
and a rising tide
counting '8, 7, 6, 5...'
Young and naive
with sanctity
with a cautious smile
voices whispering '4, 3, 2, 1.'

Buscando oro
en lo mas profundo
del sur con
una gran motivacion
cuentan '8, 7, 6, 5...'
Pidiendo paz
y tranquilidad
con una gran motivacion
las voces murmurando
dicen '...4, 3, 2, 1'


(the spanish is just an essential translation of the first stanza)

to hear it:
www.myspace.com/staircasewit1 (http://www.myspace.com/staircasewit1)

TK
07/15/08, 09:22 AM
In the song, your voice sounds a little weak. I'm not sure if it's because of the recording, but I would try to make your voice more audible. The lyrics are okay, not my favorite cup of tea, but not bad.

stendhal
07/15/08, 10:08 PM
In the song, your voice sounds a little weak. I'm not sure if it's because of the recording, but I would try to make your voice more audible. The lyrics are okay, not my favorite cup of tea, but not bad.


Yeah, the recording i definitely of demo quality. Hopefully that's why the vocals are a little weak.

thanks for listening... and for the 2 cents