Paris Is Falling

[West49ur]

This is a masquerade,
Where everyone dances with perfect posture.
We’re takin’ shots to the face,
Duking it out with nothing to lose.
I feel that I’ve lost my way,
But I’m still staggerin’ around this room.

Please don’t let this fall apart,
I feel you laying next to, (And I hear you breathe.)
Laying next to me,
So safe in your arms, (Holding on for dear life.)
So safe in your arms, so safe in your arms,
I can hear you breathe.

So she walks up to me,
With all the grace there could possibly be.
She asks, "May I have this dance?"
And somehow I stutter out, "Yes, my darling."

LET’S GO!

So remove you mask and unveil the things you’ve locked away,
The things you’ve hidden for so long,
Cause this is a Ball where everyone pretends,
But I wanna find out just who you really are,

Just let your guard down baby,
Let your guard down baby,(2x)

[lew_1987]

This didn't really have any redeeming qualities for me, sorry.

[TK]

I thought the first stanza wasn't that bad, but it just got progressively worse after that. But keep writing, everyone starts off with writing bad stuff(look at mine, haha).

[chaosB4storm]

I thought the first stanza wasn't that bad, but it just got progressively worse after that. But keep writing, everyone starts off with writing bad stuff(look at mine, haha).

once again, agreed.

[GhostMachine]

I thought of Panic At The Disco when I read the first stanza.

[West49ur]

lol this is is def i bit more hardcore than panic!
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[TK]

Panic at the Disco is sooooooooo harder