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para ser libre
06/04/04, 05:28 PM
A really quick song with hard emotion...

story behind the lyrics : got the big ole' "i need my space" dump line.....heres what resulted

it's called....

"Looking Down From Lookout Point"

You want space?
Well here I am at arms length
They are shattered, bruised, and broken
Standing ready to recieve
With mutiny before me
My lungs scream
As my heart takes control
My hands are for your hips to hold
With this beauty before me
I pray thee
Please don't leave me, please don't leave tonight
Don't leave without saying goodbye
I beseach you, hold this truth evident
It's evidence enough to know
All the things I never told...
I missed you, I needed you, I loved you....I LOVE YOU
alxneindecember
06/05/04, 04:53 AM
its good, another one i can relate to
para ser libre
06/08/04, 02:52 PM
somebody...anybody...respond?
pUnkKid174
06/08/04, 03:57 PM
very well written and just like you said, laced in hard emotion
somehow i can relate to it though i shouldnt...

extremely good lyrics, keep writing like that...
para ser libre
06/09/04, 05:28 PM
very well written and just like you said, laced in hard emotion
somehow i can relate to it though i shouldnt...

extremely good lyrics, keep writing like that...


aight cool, thanks for takign the time to look...


anybody else got something...good, bad, ugly...pretty?
ForgetThisLoser
06/09/04, 10:37 PM
Though it may not be remembered..there once was a poster on these forums named Brandnew_punk_7...and that was me...But..I read your stuff back then..and I read it now..and out of all the regulars on here..I honestly think you have the best stuff..hands down..better than anything I've written...and you're not cocky like some of these non-potentials...so...continue writing...and...just...thanks for not being an asshole/egotistical writer.
para ser libre
06/10/04, 04:55 PM
Though it may not be remembered..there once was a poster on these forums named Brandnew_punk_7...and that was me...But..I read your stuff back then..and I read it now..and out of all the regulars on here..I honestly think you have the best stuff..hands down..better than anything I've written...and you're not cocky like some of these non-potentials...so...continue writing...and...just...thanks for not being an asshole/egotistical writer.


Ha Ha, yeah i remember you, adn thank you for the compliment...

although I don't think mine is "the best stuff", it means a lot you would say that...
RefusedsXe
06/13/04, 12:05 PM
Pretty good.
para ser libre
06/15/04, 08:23 PM
Pretty good.

cool, cool.


anyon else?