Above The City

[MCSmate]

Atop various city buildings,
Looking over upon numerous rooftops
This vast city which resides before us
One of the beauties is my acceptance of heights
A fear to fall does not bring closure
It leads me closer to the door downstairs
Now standing up to myself
I am pulled closer to the edge
But that is only to see the streets below
And the ways down, because
I think the stairwell door is locked
And no one has a key...


Little tidbit I wrote in my journal today.

[matt_rawlings]

It's distinctly ok...it's just a case of being far too much like many things I have read before

[MCSmate]

It's distinctly ok...it's just a case of being far too much like many things I have read before

Thank you anyways.

[TK]

Atop various city buildings,
Looking over upon numerous rooftops
This vast city which resides before us
One of the beauties is my acceptance of heights
A fear to fall does not bring closure
It leads me closer to the door downstairs
Now standing up to myself
I am pulled closer to the edge
But that is only to see the streets below
And the ways down, because
I think the stairwell door is locked
And no one has a key...


Little tidbit I wrote in my journal today.

I liked those parts.
Although I have to agree with Matt that this isn't all that original.