The Assembly Line. Come check it out.

[thorattack]

Hello.

I write and play music in a project I call the Assembly Line. It's just me.

My influences are heavy into Death Cab for Cutie, Jimmy Eat World and Dashboard Confessional.

Simple songs with big sounds.

Someone told me listening to it was like reading a journal.

I would love to get any feedback or a review.. Please take a second and check it out.

www.myspace.com/theassemblyline (http://www.myspace.com/theassemblyline)

if you'd like the link to download it, just message me on myspace. I'm also looking for talented people to play bass,guitar,keys with me in NYC.




http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o271/thorattack/cover.jpg

[ChrisCTL]

Hey Man!

I gave your songs a listen. First thing I'm going to say is good work. This music was definitely easy listening and I can tell those artist are your influences. Not only was the music easy listening, your lyrics were great. You definitely have talent with songwriting and I encourage you to keep at it.

The only suggestion I can really give that I noticed is more articulation in your vocals. Sing a chorus or two an octave up. I noticed the back up vocals on a couple tracks were an octave up, but I think in a song, you should try powerhousing a chorus. It'll give it a strong/powerful feel, and it'll really make the listen go, Woah! And that part of the song will stand out! But on the whole, I really enjoyed the tunes and I wish you the best in the future!

My band added you as a friend on MySpace, hope you don't mind!

[thorattack]

thanks chris.. I approved your friend request.. I like your tunes quite a bit!

if you're ever in the NYC area let me know.. let's hang or do a show!!

[thorattack]

bump bc i'm an attention whore.

[thorattack]

Have you guys read the review yet?

http://absolutepunk.net/showthread.php?t=431621


92%!

[thorattack]

did you get a copy yet of the EP for FREE from the myspace page?