From the guy who brought you "The Night I Killed my Ex-Wife's Gynecologist...

[supadupa003]

Hey everyone--

So I'm not sure if you remember my username or the work I put up on here a few months ago "The Night I Killed My Ex-Wife's Gynecologist," but if you enjoyed that at all or are curious to read something from a fairly new writer, check out my 'mini-book' at beingwhelmed.com

The prologue and first chapter go up at 7:30 pm EST, and a chapter is added every 3 days. I know it's a bit of an odd concept for a book, but I wanted to give it one piece at a time so people didn't have to read an extended amount of pages at one time.

The story itself is pretty simple. It's about a twenty-something who just graduated from college and is trying to figure out his life. It really isn't plot driven, but more focused on the thought processes and beliefs of the main character. If you guys like it, tell people. If you guys hate it, tell me. I'm open to any kind of feedback or instant hate you guys throw my way. In any case, I hope you guys check it out. If you have any questions pm me or email me at being.whelmed@gmail.com. Thanks!

[supadupa003]

no comments? like/dislike?

[supadupa003]

man, 50 views and no comments...is it that bad that people are speechless?

[Duper15126]

Hey, man. Checked it out and really enjoyed it. When's the next chapter comin up?

[supadupa003]

hey thanks, i really appreciate the feedback. next chapter is up tomorrow during the day.

[CTMarshall]

Just read it and its awesome. You're a great writer man! Keep us updated.

[supadupa003]

Thanks for the encouragement :) Definitely will.

[supadupa003]

Chapter 2 is up at beingwhelmed.com. Let me know what you guys think.

[TK]

I'll try to read it when I have more time man, but I haven't had the time to really read all that much lately. I promise I'll definitely read this and let you know what I think within the next week.

[supadupa003]

Chapter 3 was just put up, and you can still check out the prologue and first 2 chapters @ beingwhelmed.com

[supadupa003]

To let everyone know, Chapter 4 is now up at beingwhelmed.com

[CTMarshall]

sweet. I'll have to check this out more when I head home. Thanks!

[supadupa003]

Chapter 5 is upppp. Chapter 6 coming this weekend.

[supadupa003]

For those of you who are interested, chapter 6 is now up

[SmAshD DrumstiX]

i just read part of the prologue [when i hav time ill read the rest]
but i like it, and im curious to see where u go with this, ;)

[judasis]

8hrs @ a desk = massive amounts of boredom.

just read all of your current postings.

so far, i'm giving it the thumbs up.

keep it coming.

[supadupa003]

Chapter 7 is up now!

[TragicZ]

Okay, I just about loved every single part of it. All the characters are believable, and the descriptions are fairly vague but... interesting. It leaves a bit for the imagination to kick in. The plot is so smooth and flowing, even though the time between "chapters" is left undefined. The language used is lovely, not the normal slangy terms of nowadays but written well enough to be understood by even the most unintellectual people. The next part comes out tomorrow, right?? And do you have any idea how many parts the story will contain??

[supadupa003]

Okay, I just about loved every single part of it. All the characters are believable, and the descriptions are fairly vague but... interesting. It leaves a bit for the imagination to kick in. The plot is so smooth and flowing, even though the time between "chapters" is left undefined. The language used is lovely, not the normal slangy terms of nowadays but written well enough to be understood by even the most unintellectual people. The next part comes out tomorrow, right?? And do you have any idea how many parts the story will contain??

It'll be 16 chapters when all is said and done; however this is only the first of three stories. As for Chapter 8, it will be up either Tuesday or Wednesday.