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punklet2101
08/06/04, 05:42 PM
Blazing down the highway,
Our bridge was dimly lit.
Something strange lives in the air,
Oblivious it hits.
The Smiths blast from the stereo,
As the tires begin to heat.
The angry woman cuts us off
And death we are to cheat.

Delay. Delay. Dead.

Slow motion takes us over,
And she’s nine small feet ahead.
A few more seconds pass us by,
That child should be in bed.
The small eyes stare,
No older than just five
Eyelashes filled with blood that scream
"But I don’t want to die"

tesseract49
08/15/04, 08:13 PM
i for one loved it....keep it up

punklet2101
12/08/04, 03:31 AM
Thanks

Used
12/08/04, 11:09 AM
You got me with the last two lines for sure!

punklet2101
12/10/04, 12:59 AM
Cool. Thanks

cris545
12/10/04, 07:36 AM
awesome, really good, keep up the good work ;)

punklet2101
12/10/04, 04:56 PM
Cheers.

More in my lj.

kimosabe
12/11/04, 07:47 AM
Cheers.

More in my lj.
really, you have a livejournal? how suprising....

charly horse
12/19/04, 12:08 PM
I liked the line and death we are to cheat.