i'm sooo emo.

[xKissMeDeadlyx]

Until I Can't Breathe

Your lies are turning into sing alongs,
and the more i listen the more i have to say.
And i'm not the only one who's singing
its just that your eyes don't lie they give you away.

so answer me one question
is this hurting you to hurt me yet?
just let me know when it does.

so paint my face with cover-up
cause you're piercing my sking with your blank stares.
Just keep on squeezing until i can't breathe,
because most of the time i think you that you care.

so answer me one question
is this hurting you to hurt me yet?
just let me know when it does.

so with these needles in my skin,
i think its safe to say, you've sealed my fate.
because the radiation is turning my skin blue
just like the colour of my face as i suffocate.

so answer me one question
is this hurting you to hurt me yet?
just let me know when it does.

you called me again, but i think you're just using me again
and i think i'm tired of trying and tired of missing you,
and i'm sick of being your fall through call.
i hope you think of this all the time, or at least more than you want to.

so answer me one question
is this hurting you to hurt me yet?
just let me know when it does.

just let me know when it does.

[CircaEnder]

I like this song alot.It has some really good/thought out lines

Your lies are turning into sing alongs,
and the more i listen the more i have to say.
And i'm not the only one who's singing
its just that your eyes don't lie they give you away.



this whole verse is really awesome nice work.

[xKissMeDeadlyx]

Thanks. that's my problem, i can always get an awesome opening verse, after that it goes down hill.

[CircaEnder]

it sucks writing a really good first verse cause then you want the second one to be as good/better ..and thats hard to do sometimes

[xKissMeDeadlyx]

seriously. haha
but i'll keep working on it.
that's only the first draft of it.. so hopefully the finished product will be.. love-ly.

[ripmyheartout]

That's one of the best things I've read in awhile... got anything else? If you do, could you send some to me?

[Mumrah]

Pah, you think you're SO emo? Balls. I'M so emo!

Boo-Hoo, I'm So Emo
--------------------

Boo-hoo, I'm so emo,
And no-one understands me.
I hate both my parents;
They call me 'twat' and 'pansy'.
I've got more scars that you,
Floppier hair, and a 'broken heart' tattoo...


Well, it's just the first verse so far, but I've worked out that the next bit will come in heavy with a riff ripped off from Iron Maiden, then I'll whine a bit more, and then scream something indecipherable. Sounds like a plan? Hell, it's GENIUS!!!

[xKissMeDeadlyx]

Hell, you SUCK!

Pah, you think you're SO emo? Balls. I'M so emo!

Boo-Hoo, I'm So Emo
--------------------

Boo-hoo, I'm so emo,
And no-one understands me.
I hate both my parents;
They call me 'twat' and 'pansy'.
I've got more scars that you,
Floppier hair, and a 'broken heart' tattoo...


Well, it's just the first verse so far, but I've worked out that the next bit will come in heavy with a riff ripped off from Iron Maiden, then I'll whine a bit more, and then scream something indecipherable. Sounds like a plan? Hell, it's GENIUS!!!

[kimosabe]

^awesome!