Dress My Wounds

[SockMonkeyRiot]

Here is something that I wrote last fall, it's a short simple song that was meant to transition to the last song on the album my band was working on.

Dress My Wounds

I don't know if it's a lie,
but I keep telling myself I
wanna get better I wanna get
out of this meltdown alive
face my problems and survive
I'm gonna get better, I'm gonna get out

I don't know if it's a lie,
but I keep telling myself I
wanna get better I'm gonna start
giving up on trying to die
dress my wounds and bide my time
I'm gonna get better, I'm gonna get out

I don't believe in anything, I don't believe in anything
I don't believe in anything, I don't believe in anything I can't feel

[Mirrorsandfevers]

I like it.

[lew_1987]

I like it, but I don't think it would work if it wasn't a short interlude/intro/transition type song. Pretty simple, but it works. Your choice of line breaks is good at some points.

[SockMonkeyRiot]

thanks.

I was initially planning on making it longer but after I wrote this bit and played it a bunch I realized that it sounded really good as a 1:30 long song and I would probably end up ruining it if I kept going :p

I just recorded a demo of it, I'll try and put it up sometime within the week.

[lew_1987]

That would be good.