A Boy Who Loved Windows

[mercutio7]

Hey whats up, this is my band Mercutio's new song, I just recorded it acoustic(I'm still writing it. I recorded me singing the bridge if you wanna hear it, IM me at satticus187.

"A Boy Who Loved Windows"
Predictable as the tide, I come and go
The thought of you fills my sails, I don't know why
So sink my ship, with words of caution, spoke beneath our sea
Watch me sink so I die, with company

You're smiles tattooed on my eyes
I'll be you're lighthouse, and shoot my selfish side

You're eyes they spell disaster
Yet we come, eagerly
Oh your lies they sooth me, they put my mind at ease
So chain my arms and legs
and ease me off this plank
I'd rather sink in your ocean
Then have lived my life ashore

I'm choking on your perfume
Yet it's all I want to breathe
And she eclipses everything
when everything's awrey
A friendly face means everything
Everything to me

[Hilikus]

I really like them alot. You used alot of good metaphors and such. In someway when i read the lyrics i think of Peter Pan but i dont know why.

By the way i really like your band name.

Once again ill congragualte you on your lyrics. Good Job! ;)

[fractions]

It's quite good actually

[T Wizzle]

"I'm choking on your perfume
Yet it's all I want to breathe"... ASTOUNDING... emo to the core

[coke_with_lime]

Wow... this is a very good emo song! I gotta say the way you used all of your words were pretty kool. But hey I'm new here and your the first song I've seen, but either way I think it was a great song.

Me and my band come here to get ideas and stuff. We're just barely starting! Heck, just a bunch of 14 year olds and a 11 year old drummer.... yeah we'll make it big one day. lol But don't doubt us we're pretty good! okay.. I'll shut up now. :lipsrseal

But once again great song! :luvu:

[mercutio7]

I appreciate your comliment coke_with_lime but I would really appreciate it if you didn't get any "ideas" from my song. Not trying to sound like an asshole but it's going on my band Mercutio's cd this oct and I don't wanna see those lyrics float up in another song if you catch my drift. But once again, thanks for the compliment

[coke_with_lime]

Oh, no prob! And trust me I'm not like that! I make my own songs with my own style, I come here to check out other bands and crap like that. But no I'd never take anyone's lyrics on here. So you don't have to worry about that. Coz personally I'd get ticked too if I heard someone stole mine. So anyway, just thought I'd clear that up and stuff. :D

[_kissimmee_]

your lyrics are incredible.i'm serious, i loved them. i can't wait to hear them put to music so u can keep me updated!

[mercutio7]

your lyrics are incredible.i'm serious, i loved them. i can't wait to hear them put to music so u can keep me updated!


Thanks very much, we're actually recording an EP that has a tentative date of Oct. 10th. We plan on calling it "A Day You've Been Wating For". We're having web hosting problems, so there may or may not be music on our site. If it is it's an acoustic called "I am Your Funeral Flower". www.mercutiorock.com