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PunkAngel
09/17/04, 09:23 PM
The music of my soul
has so many verses
So many singers
So many Insterments.
Sometimes it's sad,
Sometimes it's Glad.
Happieness is there,
Yet sometimes unseen.
The music is playing
and turning and saying,
Soon joy will come through the pain
Hope will shine through,
Love will go on,
and the music of my soul will forever be playing.
H.R 9/5/04

kimosabe
09/18/04, 05:19 AM
.
Sometimes it's sad,
Sometimes it's Glad.

*cringe*

theESCO
09/18/04, 11:42 AM
I know its your work and you can write how you think it should be, but I agree with dude above.

I can't take anything seriously with the word 'glad' in it. Other than that, dope work.