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souljasam95
08/20/08, 10:38 PM
Burning emotions inside,
Dying to be free.
Picking up the razor,
My only friend and family.
Emotions slowly escaping,
Flowing from the cuts on my wrist.
Escaping from the pain,
Placing myself into bliss.
The pain is gone,
Temporarily I'm free.
Escaped from my problems,
Watching myself bleed.



What you guys think?

jster2000
08/20/08, 11:01 PM
are all your songs about cutting your self?

souljasam95
08/20/08, 11:05 PM
no---just some and this is a poem

WillNelms
08/20/08, 11:08 PM
This is just lame and whiny.. seriously all your poems/songs/what ever you call them are about all this emo/goth crap. stop whining

souljasam95
08/20/08, 11:10 PM
first off-no there not....second off goth isnt crap, i happen to be goth, and labels are just stupid...third off---i just recovered from rehab from emotionally depressed and cutting...so if ur gonna say im whining or its lame what ever........dont bother me none

wileythekid
08/21/08, 05:54 PM
I'm sorry if this really happened to you, But this is such cliched subject matter and its commonly associated with the emo stereotype so i dont think alot of people want to hear about the same old thing. maybe you could try being more positive seeing as you just recovered from this.