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wileythekid
08/21/08, 06:46 PM
This is a new song I wrote let me know what you think.

My stomach is churning
And I am yearning
For this to be over
All bad things will
Come to an end
But it's so hard getting through them
And it's torture waiting for them to start

All my thoughts
Are speeding up my heart
And I'd rather be anywhere but here
With all these thoughts on my mind
I'll never get to sleep tonight

Tomarrow brings a new day
A new challenge for me
I'll see if I can through this in one piece
I'll get my mind off the past
Focus on the future
I'll see if i can do it right this time around

All my thoughts
Are speeding up my heart
And I'd rather be anywhere but here
With all these thought on my mind
I'll never get to sleep tonight

jster2000
08/21/08, 08:20 PM
well
i like it

wileythekid
08/22/08, 03:54 PM
good to know

jster2000
08/23/08, 07:10 PM
adding another verse though
could be a good thing
message me what the guitar is like