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[sk8er4life88]

Hey i wanted ppl to see what n how i write so if u dont mind tell me what u think i will bring more to u if u like it this is jus the recent one i have

Do you want to see this blood?
Do you want to see it run like a flood?
This blade slides across my wrist
I clench my fist
Feeling this pain
I scream in vain
I wanna die
I wanna see you cry
As I hit the floor in a puddle of my own
My own blood see it as its shown
Shown all over the floor
It's coming straight from my core

[kimosabe]

Poe move over! We have a new lyrical master at this board! can't wait until you get famous and make songs for bands like NFG and GC.

[kimosabe]

also i dig you signature and how the monkey piss on pop music, i dont like pop music either. That is a really cool statement that your making. Standing up for your own opinions and not following pop cultures. you are really brave and diffrent from everybody else, like this hot topic shirt i got that says "you laugh at me because im diffrent, i laugh because you're all the same"
as a punx i know exactly how you feel lol. you are super cool.

[sk8er4life88]

Poe move over! We have a new lyrical master at this board! can't wait until you get famous and make songs for bands like NFG and GC.
hey thanks and yea i am tryin to start a band i play bass but i cant sing n i have a drummer n all that jus no one who can sing the song right u know?? well later

[kimosabe]

your welcome.
you are awesome, my new favourite person on this board

[sk8er4life88]

lol thats cool well i hope u dont mind imma add u too ym list thingy

[kimosabe]

lol thats cool well i hope u dont mind imma add u too ym list thingy
wow that would be awesome! do you mind if i put
*best friend with sk8er4life88* in my sig? thatd be so cool lol. what list BTW lol? (i love your name too. do you skate? i dont but i wear skate clothes so people think i skate lol. what brands do you like?

[sk8er4life88]

yea i skate i wear whatever i can skate in really dont matter to me i dont care what name brand or nething i dont like bein popular or ne of that shit even though i am but if ur gonna wear the cloths u should atleast try to skate

[kimosabe]

yea i skate i wear whatever i can skate in really dont matter to me i dont care what name brand or nething i dont like bein popular or ne of that shit even though i am but if ur gonna wear the cloths u should atleast try to skate
yea same here i dont care about what other people wear im just being myself but i dunno what to wear. i used to wear fubu but then someone said it was just for black people lol so i dont know what skaters wear. STAY PUNX!!!!11

[sk8er4life88]

stick to things at stores like skate shops and places like pac sun at the mall i skate in alot of cloths so everythings the same to me

[kimosabe]

stick to things at stores like skate shops and places like pac sun at the mall i skate in alot of cloths so everythings the same to me
yeah ill try to buy something at the mall. i hang out there all the time lol so its easy for me lol! but they have skate and bmX clothes so i hope i dont pick wrong and look like a BMXer! LOL!!!

[sk8er4life88]

nothin is wrong wit bmx i do that to im really active i go to competitions for skate n bmx so nothin is wrong wit that plus they wear the same cloths

[guitarguy33]

My goodness I think i'm going to cry for you....

[as night falls]

I liked your poem, I soo understand it.

[mOvielife99]

not my style, cheer up man

[nightjarWI]

Your poem rymed, well from what I read it did. Your spelling is atrocious though, "cloths" is not the way you spell clothes. I may sound like an English teacher but yea, spelling mistakes like that are for first graders.

[JustLikeAMovie]

good job at the rhyming, it's an alright poem over all.

[TheNumberOneFan]

blah... i don't know... sometimes things are better when more thought is put into the actual words than into whether the preceeding word rhymes with the next... who knows, maybe that's just me?

[JustLikeAMovie]

no, your right, i almost never use rhyming in my poetry because it doesn't work with how i write. But if rhyming is something you wanna get down, you gotta start somewhere