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sk8er4life88
10/15/04, 10:12 AM
for all my poems im jus wonderin what ppl think bout them so if u dont mind jus let me know when ur finished bout what u think

I look at my wrist
Clenching this knife in my fist
I look back at your picture on the wall
And i can feel my legs give out as i begin to fall
It feels like you were never there
And now I can't bare
Not having you by my side
Having no one to talk to on those lonely rides
We could talk for hours
And now we have nothing to call ours
I hate this feeling
None of my wounds are healing
You left me before
Lieing on this same floor
So leave again
And just pretend
That we never were
And I will move on to her

LoveHate
10/17/04, 12:38 AM
that was pretty good

as night falls
10/17/04, 04:59 PM
I like it, its sad though. :(