burntpaper
10/17/04, 04:19 PM
My Sleeping Beauty
and she's eternal rest in a prom dress
the girl you've never seen smile
and she's rotting from the inside out
right through her once beautiful skin
and does she not have the right to dream
and does she not have the right to cry
when you play the games that make her scream
and in her mixed up state she wants to die
filled with hate she runs but can't get away
from dreams of that forsaken night
she's haunted always
yours is a face she'll never forget
for the rest of her days
and she will never leave the night you met
in a mud stained, blood stained prom dress
pretty face and hidden horns, go away
forgivness? she'll never hear a word you say
through the humming in her ears
the soundtrack of her own voice in tears
screams of NO stuck on repeat
so she burns down her own house that night
oh, what a pretty corpse she'll be
never changing
never fading
angelic
that's the way she'll always be
the way she'll always be
and she'll always be..
my sleeping beauty
-^^-
This is a song I wrote for my friends band. Could you tell me what you think and how I can improve it. Thank you.
Chrissi
and she's eternal rest in a prom dress
the girl you've never seen smile
and she's rotting from the inside out
right through her once beautiful skin
and does she not have the right to dream
and does she not have the right to cry
when you play the games that make her scream
and in her mixed up state she wants to die
filled with hate she runs but can't get away
from dreams of that forsaken night
she's haunted always
yours is a face she'll never forget
for the rest of her days
and she will never leave the night you met
in a mud stained, blood stained prom dress
pretty face and hidden horns, go away
forgivness? she'll never hear a word you say
through the humming in her ears
the soundtrack of her own voice in tears
screams of NO stuck on repeat
so she burns down her own house that night
oh, what a pretty corpse she'll be
never changing
never fading
angelic
that's the way she'll always be
the way she'll always be
and she'll always be..
my sleeping beauty
-^^-
This is a song I wrote for my friends band. Could you tell me what you think and how I can improve it. Thank you.
Chrissi