every1 plez read this n tell me wat u think

[supergirl101]

The Nightmare

As i fell asleep
You poped into my mind
Everything you said
And everything you did to me
This is my nightmare
It wont go away
Even if i try to wake up
Thats when i realize,its not a nightmare
It really happend


:sun_smile

[supergirl101]

has any1 got anything to say bout it????????good or bad?????

[kimosabe]

second word, second line. you forgot an 'o'...

[supergirl101]

any1 else??????





:slimie:

[punkpixie]

Its too short, and kind of boring. Its a very typical 'emo' person poem. Sorry I didn't have anything good to say....