fromashes

[wasteoftaste]

hey if wanna check out some real poetry, hop on over to my website called fromashes. http://geocities.com/fromashes19. thanx - if check it out, please leave me some feedback in the guestbook at the site.

[guitarguy33]

hey if wanna check out some real poetry, hop on over to my website called fromashes. http://geocities.com/fromashes19. thanx - if check it out, please leave me some feedback in the guestbook at the site.

That comment kind of sucks for those of us who thought our writing was actually good.

[wasteoftaste]

whats that suppose to mean?

[punkpixie]

^^^^
I think hes refering to the 'if you wanna see some real poetry....' part of your post. I kind of agree with him too. Not everyone here posts shitty emo poems you know.

[punkpixie]

I just visited your site and I have got to be honest, I don't like your poetry. Its all one giant cliche.

[wasteoftaste]

thanks for your opinion.

[guitarguy33]

^^^^
I think hes refering to the 'if you wanna see some real poetry....' part of your post. I kind of agree with him too. Not everyone here posts shitty emo poems you know.

Yes, that is what I was referring to.

[nightjarWI]

"Breakup day (my least favorite holiday)" isn't that a Starting Line song? Keep writing, your poetry isn't exactly symbolic but it doesn't have to be, it isn't completely terrible, you may just need some practice. Never stop writing, the more you write, the better you will get.

[wasteoftaste]

it may be a starting line song, my entention(sp?) was never to steal the name of a song by another band. thanks for the heads up tho.

[swingandsway]

intention..yeah.

[wasteoftaste]

intention no. sorry.