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malebolge
10/26/04, 02:43 PM
The wildflowers didn't bloom today,
The sea anenomes stayed closed.
The sun shone a little too brightly;
There was frost covering the soggy July ground.
And something about your expression seemed out of place as well.

The moon rose too early,
And collided with the sun.
That sparrow with the broken wing
Sang its favorite melody, with all the notes too flat,
And the sweltering air mixed
With the stale beer in the alley
Created a stifling atmosphere.

And nothing felt right,
Not us, not the world,
Not the hail, or the tulips,
Or even the Something Corporate song on the radio.
Except...
For once in my life,
Goodbye seemed so right:
The thrill and the comfort were gone.

Lueda Alia
10/28/04, 01:42 AM
that was pretty good. besides, you mentioned SoCo... oh yes. :D

malebolge
10/28/04, 01:24 PM
haha thanks...

JustLikeAMovie
10/29/04, 10:24 PM
I love it, that's fucking awsome. it's really different and refreshing for some reason. write/post more

malebolge
10/31/04, 09:20 AM
wow thanks that's very nice of you...and i shall most certianly try to post more...