Need Help Wit A Title....

[sk8er4life88]

i hate the feelin that im losin u
it makes me feel so down n blue
i thought it was over between u n him
no it seems like its all come out to ur rim
so how am i supposed to feel
i jus wish u would take away this peel
the one that covers the inside core
cause all ur makin me do is hit this damn floor
now im jus lost in a puddle of mixed emotions
so why dont u help me find out some type of notion

i know this poem is sad :( n all but it expresses how i feel right about now i jus wrote it so can u help me with a name???? thanks

[JustLikeAMovie]

for the emotion you put into it and for the fact i can relate, i give you a plus(+)
but, the poem itself isn't the greatest ever. Props to you for trying the rhyming, although it comes out sounding kind of corny and forced, you gotta start somewhere though... Try expanding your word usage, you'll be surprised how much different words can improve a poem. And try adding more imagery too, like the puddle of mixed emotions, stuff like that. Keep posting :)

[sk8er4life88]

i guess u havent read ne of my other stuff have u check them out

[JustLikeAMovie]

will do