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thepunkpig
11/02/04, 01:13 PM
if you only knew, but you know. this is a story going no where and i'm broken in between. does between mean anything to you? does this story mean anything to you? i wish i knew, but i can't know everything. don't break my heart, beauty. my heart is in those hands of his. he's my guard. i don't mind, he keeps me safe. go around in circles. get dizzy yet? get tired yet? you know something, beauty, i see you everywhere. i saw you in my bed last night and then again in my dreams. "oh lovely sir, will you paint me beauty?" that what you want, isn't it? you're not an obsession, just a hobby. you like to stare at me through my mirror. i'm shocked you don't laugh. there's more to you, beauty. i figured it out. look at my thoughts, there you lay, beauty. no paint me, beauty. draw a sun in my sky, or maybe just a pink cloud. beauty, you're in my bed again, and now in my head. i love him and you're loving me too much. beauth, loosen your grip on my arm. please paint me over, beauty.


i wrote this last night. tell me what you think

burnt_effigy
11/04/04, 07:12 PM
i liked that..it's raw and honest. congrats.