My suicide

[living2die]

i wrote this poem a while ago... i hope you like it! give me feedback!

My suicide:

a slash for you, a scar for me
cutting deeper, watch me bleed
pain is nothin to that you made me feel
but none the less it makes me real
i would write, numb the pain
but writing is just not the same
so here i am, cutting deeper
you, my very own grim reaper
though bleeding has stopped, help has too
theres nothing left, another slash for you
for all your memories that just wont leave
for all the times that i believed
i cannot find an end to this
dont forget its you i miss
stuck in an eternal prison
i need to stop the pain has risen
its getting worse its still rising
still depressed, thats not surprising
i cannot take this anymore
torn down to a broken core
in your eyes i dont exist
with broken wings and bleeding wrists
you think im happy, so sure its true
i really havent got a clue
every smile is only fake
a painted images, just waiting to break
no more writing, soothe the pain
no more crimson from these veins
a slash for you, a scar for me
cutting deeper, until im free...

By Amy xox

[punklet2101]

http://www.absolutepunk.net/showthread.php?t=50720

[kimosabe]

you know what you should do to get credibility as a poet writing a poem called "My suicide" ??
Yeah, that's right; go kill yourself.