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emptycriminal
08/29/08, 06:05 AM
What is the style to tell you this story
And how many miles to explain the sorry
Where does the apology end
Does all of this make amends
For all the lies I tried to send
And all the fear I’m drowning in
Why can’t I seem to speak the words
On the tip of my tongue that are never heard
Why can’t I seem to ever find the truth
And how come I can never believe in you

I’ll shut my mouth before my doubts come out
Close my eyes until my heart shuts down
I’m like a wheel that won’t go round
I am the lost without the found

How do we know who we are
What do we know anyway
Nothing is as simple as it ever seems to be
Living like a secret, I’ve been silent and discreet
My arms have been wide open as I’m welcoming defeat
I’ve never been a liar, and I’ve never been a thief
When you look in the mirror, how honest can you be?

Little regrets and shelf of mistakes
And all of the truth that I couldn’t take
Everything’s in reach, but I’m just out of touch
Enough is enough when enough becomes too much

eddee
08/31/08, 04:14 AM
I hope you have Copywrited this.
its really good.
just print out a copy of this.

send yourself this in the post.
and it will have the date on it and never open it.
and if someone steels it take that envolope to the judge and ask him the check the date and open it.
its happened to me.
it never got to the judge.
we sorted it out before it got that far. he admitted he had stolen my work.
i do like this.
if you or some mates can play the guitar or piano get this to some acoustic music.

eddee
08/31/08, 04:15 AM
I would like to see a nice chorus section though

WillNelms
08/31/08, 12:53 PM
pretty decent. i liked it

xidreamofyou32x
08/31/08, 02:29 PM
This is pretty good, I like it :] I love this line: "I am the lost without the found"