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burnt_effigy
11/04/04, 07:13 PM
Regurgitate
Can't be said with half-dime rhyme or
Make me sick black birds pale yellow
I fell down retching
Pages to pages of drivel, my thoughts
Won't let me say 'heart'
Used before answer
Me and say you won't leave
Say you won't judge what I've told you
In an incomplete half
Your mind three pennies for what's inside it
One week dance don't say it's something rare
This is my life you're jading
A gentle thought's misgiven
To fall, or to let one fall
In the interest of symmetry.

kimosabe
11/06/04, 03:39 AM
awesome

punkpixie
11/09/04, 10:04 AM
Wow. I really liked that, I enjoyed the word play.