Help with a name

[Black_And_Red]

Ok this is for a poetry comp so tell me what you think and suggested names. You'll be seeing a lot more of me, the 12 year old punk lovin poet, Alex cause i love poetry. Also what do you think about my age and the quality of the poem. Thanks Alot. PuNk 4 LiFe


I closed my eyes
And saw the cloudy skies
A burning forest
Full of made up lies

When I see your face
I turn away in disgrace
You keep running away
I have to keep up with the pace

There’s no rest for me
Just forget about we
I never knew the whole truth
Go be where you want to be

I can’t believe what I’ve done
You left and started to run
And now that your gone
I’ve got to find another someone

[JustLikeAMovie]

It's well written. I really like the first three lines of the first stanza. but after that the content gets really cliche and boring.

[mOvielife99]

i like it, its not totally depressing like a lot of other poems ive read on this board